Ok I have to preface this by the fact that this is a very long book that I did not finish because of issues I will explain. I haven't included a synopsis because the blurb for the book doesn't resemble what I've read - I'm assuming that a lot more happens so I will say if you don't find the beginning 150-200 pages the same kind of road block that I did, there's probably a much meatier story lurking behind it.
But I was forcing myself to read long before I stopped and for the sake of an honest review, it doesn't matter if your book becomes awesome in the last 300 pages, if the first 300 pages are too much of a roadblock to meet it. But if you can get past that road block, you may love it.
Now - onwards:
Recently we took part in the Book Smuggler’s holiday Smugglivus and one of the points we raised on ourInclusive Ingrid post was:
Sometimes Inclusive Ingrid wrote this book to tell us that racism/homophobia/sexism/ableism et al is bad, guys. Let me tell you how bad it is, because it’s really really bad. Have you not seen how bad it is? Don’t worry, this book makes it very very clear. Example after example, incident after incident all explained in detail. It’s a wonderful lecture on the damage and prevalence of prejudice! Unfortunately what it isn’t, is a story. Inclusive Ingrid has sat herself down and written one long PSA, shoe-horned in some downtrodden vampires and a werewolf who wants to expound on their women’s studies notes, and neglected to actually include a plot. Or characters we don’t want to cheerfully beat to death with their own sociology 101 texts.
That’s pretty much the very definition of this book. It is there to make a point and it does to at length and with great repetition. Some time ago I read the Sword of Truth series by Terry Goodkind which was, basically, a great big love in to Ayn Rand and the joys of libertarianism. This book is Anarchism version – one long polemic on how anarchy, no government etc is such a wonderful thing conveyed through an alien living in a utopian society describing his world and showing us the way to fix our world.
Now, I’ll add another preface by saying I am a very liberal person – I am, in many ways, the commie-pinko-socialist the right wingers love to hate – so many of the points the author was trying to raise definitely resonated with me: environmental destruction, wealth inequality, lack of representation in democracy, the way politicians try to hold power – so, no I’m not putting this book down because it clashes with my political views because in some ways it doesn’t (until the libertarianism raises its ugly head).
But it is mind numbingly naïve and simplistic to a point where I’m not sure whether the author even believes what they’re writing or is trying to parody them
Most of this lecturing is delivered by having an alien, Albert, describe his society to many people, starting with married couple Tom and Samantha. After many many many many lectures (and shenanigans from a Completely Awful Journalist) a television interview happens which is very very very long and this, in turn, leads to a big societal uprising that Tom and Samantha lead
In some ways it was very useful that it was an alien that communicated their world and society because it required a completely alien world and an alien society for me to believe it was workable. The inherent practicality of it that even the book has to acknowledge is backed by a lot of special alien woo-woo to cover any of the inconveniences that putting humans in this system would bring (not least of which are the aliens not needing cooked food, food storage, medicine, sanitation, construction, recorded history, literature, written communication at all, transport, education – so much more). Basically, the alien physiology (and low resource nature of their world) renders any kind of collective undertaking unnecessary. They live as free-thinking individuals without leadership, hierarchy, government or laws because absolutely nothing in their society or world requires collective effort. And even this doesn’t follow through in their depiction – because this society with virtually stone age tool use (and even that is helped by an incredibly convenient ecology that produces easily customisable items) has still managed to produce chemical and biological weapons… somehow.
As for order in this alien society – well they don’t need laws because they have an absolutely terrifying level of conformity. People don’t do anything considered wrong because they’re raised to believe that some things are “just not done.” There’s no rebellion or questioning and this completely fails to work with a truly long section on the diversity of viewpoints, seeing things from different positions in order to reach the truth – because their whole ordered society requires people not to have differing viewpoints. For bonus funsies, all aliens gather together in rituals that merge their consciousness ensuring both conformity and complete lack of anything resembling privacy. Also, the society has gone all Vulcan and removed any extreme emotions because emotionally lobotomising this population is the only way their society can work. And yet, utopia!
I’m not against an alien society having any of these features – it’s all a fascinating look at a completely alternate society based on beings that are very alien from ourselves. What I am against is apparently a huge number of people hearing this and decides it’s a wonderful way for people to live. Albert is praised for the world he presents, his ideas cause a vast revolution and absolutely no-one sees the absolutely terrifying dystopia he’s presenting or how humans quite simply do not fit in his world setting.
In some ways I kind of hope that towards the end of the book everyone gets a swift dose of practicality and challenges all this – but I DNFed at 150 pages – and not just because the lack of any real depth to the lectures, but the way they are presented as well.
First of all, we have a truly ludicrous amount of exposition. This book is 650 pages long and if the rest of the book is anything like the part I read then at least 400 of those pages are spent on clumsy lectures. From pages 84-112 we literally have nothing but Albert sat there explaining his alien world. And that’s not the first lecture, not even close. The info-dumping is tremendous.